Saturday, June 25, 2016

#8Sunday #SexySnippets #WeekendWritingWarriors #paranormal

Happy Sunday, guys!

Thanks for all the input regarding last week's snippet. It really helps. *smile*





Today, I'm continuing with the story and we're going to find out a little more about Kaila and why she's there.

This snippet has been edited to keep to guidelines.



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As a psychologist on Earth she’d had to deal with Sloth’s victims countless times. Some were stronger and were able to rid themselves of his influence, but none ever returned the same. Once Sloth touched you… She wrapped her arms around herself, her thoughts immediately turning to her sister Melisa. She’d never forgive herself for missing it and ignoring his influence on her. She’d been so busy with others she’d failed to see what was occurring in front of her own nose. Kaila gritted her teeth. It’d be okay. That was why she was here. Today she was going to go in there and pull her sister out of Sloth’s clutches whatever the cost.
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14 comments:

  1. Oh my, I love that hint of what motivates her here. Fabulous snippet, Elyzabeth :)

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  2. I love her motivation, and would not want to be Sloth. Great snippet!

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  3. I hope he is able to rescue her sister unharmed from Sloth's clutches. He does not sound like someone you would want to be involved with. Great snippet.

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  4. I admire Kaila's determination to save her sister. Let's hope she succeeds! :D

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  5. Oh my, a classic set up if I ever saw one, inagoodway - she's so sure she knows all the facts! Great snippet!

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  6. Good luck to her. Sloth sounds like a nasty bad guy.

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  7. So it's truly personal. Hope she succeeds!

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  8. I so admire her determination. Can't wait to see if she succeeds. Sloth sounds like a bad-ass.

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  9. She sounds like a strong character. I hope she can save her sister.

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  10. Kaila is determined...good luck to her, and to Melisa. :-)

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  11. How often that happens, Elyzabeth. And with dire consequences. Excellent energy in this piece.

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  12. How often that happens, Elyzabeth. And with dire consequences. Excellent energy in this piece.

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  13. Seems like there is a lot of guilt driven determination going on here.

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  14. Let's hope it goes as she wishes. But I suspect it wouldn't. Great snippet, Elyzabeth.

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